Absentee from the Abyss

Hello, writerly peeps,

Here is a short story of mine that I like and I am toying with the idea of doing a series of shorts related to these characters (places). I welcome any and all feedback, problems, contradictions - there is one or two in character description - and any positives.

"Demonstration of an Invention" (Excuse the shitty formatting)

I will have some very rough "clay" from a first-draft novel soon. Good writing, good coffee, good thoughts...

Tim

PS Hope Ryan's was rejuvenating... couldn't make it but will later.

Hola Mis Amigos

Yep, I have an account and now I am tapped into this one. In fact (shameless self-promotion ahead), I have three other accounts:

languagedoodler


derriva-da


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Enjoy!

Doug

Hmm

Will this actually post my name, and not someone else's? I'm thinking that if we all had blogger accounts, we could use them to log in here.

Rob