Absentee from the Abyss
Hello, writerly peeps,
Here is a short story of mine that I like and I am toying with the idea of doing a series of shorts related to these characters (places). I welcome any and all feedback, problems, contradictions - there is one or two in character description - and any positives.
"Demonstration of an Invention" (Excuse the shitty formatting)
I will have some very rough "clay" from a first-draft novel soon. Good writing, good coffee, good thoughts...
Tim
PS Hope Ryan's was rejuvenating... couldn't make it but will later.
Here is a short story of mine that I like and I am toying with the idea of doing a series of shorts related to these characters (places). I welcome any and all feedback, problems, contradictions - there is one or two in character description - and any positives.
"Demonstration of an Invention" (Excuse the shitty formatting)
I will have some very rough "clay" from a first-draft novel soon. Good writing, good coffee, good thoughts...
Tim
PS Hope Ryan's was rejuvenating... couldn't make it but will later.

2 Comments:
I just used an URL from a site that published my short story.
Strangeroad.com
webmonkey.com or blogger.com has html writing tips and cheat sheets
Enjoy.
What do you think of the story?!
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